Sunday, September 27, 2009

For ALL Homerooms- Question #2


Summarize Oliver's Game using SWBST. I look forward to reading your responses!

Use the following format:

___________ wanted____________ but________________ so ______________ then____________.

-Miss Harwood

22 comments:

  1. Dear Miss Harwood,

    Somebody:Oliver and Granpa
    Wanted:To be a baseball player
    But:He couldn't play
    So:His granfather tauht him how to play
    Then:He could play really good and he was in a team.
    -Katherine Contreras

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  2. Dear Ms.Harwood

    SOMEBODY:OLIVER,AND HIS GRANDPA.
    WANTED:HE WANTED TO PLAY BASEBALL.
    BUT:HE DIDIN'T KNOW HOW TO PLAY.
    SO:SO, HIS GRANDPA TOOK HIM TO THE BASEBALL FIELD AND NOW HE IS LEARNING HOW TO PLAY.
    THEN:HE PLAYED ON A BASEBALL TEAM.


    SINCERLY,KARI

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  3. dear ms. harwood

    somebody oliver and his old grandpa.
    wanted to make hiim play baseball.
    but he did not no how to play baseball.
    so so he did not no how to run faster.
    then then he was so good.


    javier

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  4. Dear miss.harwood, 0liver wanted to know whose old Cubs shirt it was but he needed to ask his grandpa so he asked his grandpa then after his grandpa told him he knew th shirt was his grandfather

    love,Joselyn Jimenez

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  5. John D. Wilson, Oliver wanted to play for the Cubs but he was two young so he wated then Japan acaticted Pearl Harber and the Cubs went to war.

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  6. somebody-oliver and his grandfather
    wanted-oliver's grandfather had a sad and happy story about the cubs
    but-in the story grandfather joined the marines instead of playing baseball
    so-the war ended and people watched baseball again
    then-grandfather realised he always had baseball in him so he gave the uniform to his grandson oliver

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  7. Someboody-oliver and his grandfather.Wanted-oliver wanted to here the story of the uniform.But-his grandfather said that it was a sad story.So-the grandfater told the story.the grand father plays basball really good.he plays in the cubs.Then-the grandfather gives the uniform to the kid

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  8. From atalia Somebody- oliver,granfather.Wanted-Oliver wanted to hear the story of his gradfather.But-the grandfather said it wasnt always a happy story.It was a said story too.So-his grandfather told the story.He was a realy good at basball.Then-Oliver got too keep the uniform of the cubs.

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  9. somebody-Oliver,Grandpa wanted-granpa wanted to play in the baseball team but- but once he got to the tesm he could'nt play as well as he could so- so he started to play better then- he got better at it giselle

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  10. dear miss.harwood

    oliver wanted to know what was the uniform for.
    and then his grandpa told him what it was for.
    then oliver's grandphather told oliver that he could have the uniform. then they lived hapily ever after.

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  11. olivor found his grandpas chicago jacket and asked him where he got it.his grandpa said he got it on the team.once he got on the team because he hit a real good homerun.the coach asked him if he wanted to join the team for next season.then a war came so he decided to join the army.then once the war was over he couldnt play baseball.so the coach said that he could sit in the bleachers any time he wanted.but instead of sitting in the bleachers he sat were the other people sat.from josh orellana

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  12. I like oliver's game,because it is about his grandpaw playing little luege baseball when he was little.He made a homerun.He went to war and brock his leg the coach said you can't play no more.

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  13. Oliver grandpa wanted to play with the cubs.But when his grandpa told him to find this material, he found a box with a cubs uniform.So then his granpa came and saw him examing his box in the back, of the shelf.Then Olivers grandpan told him the story of when he was young.

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  14. Dear Miss.Harwood Oliver wanted to play in the cubs majer leuge but he figured out that America was fighting war so he went to the marines then figered out he was part of the game evan of he wasnt playing.

    -natalie segovia

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  15. olvier wanted to be in the cubs but then he wanted to be in the marines so he joined the marines then he got back and was still part of the game
    ashley ventura

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  16. olver wanted to play for the cubs but hey read the newspaper so he join the marines then a grandes exploded and he got hurt rickyrodriguez

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  17. olever wantet to play in cubs but he read that war so then he goned in the war and he got out the war and seed that he culde not play eny more so and he was stile happy even if it was not playing eny mor arturo ruiz

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  18. Olive wanted to tell his grandson about playing on his favorite team the cubs,but sometimes it wasn't always a happy story,so his grandson finally found his old uniform,then he told him the story then Oliver gave his grandson his uniform.


    -Laurel B.

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  19. Oliver wanted to play baseball but , he coueld not play as good . SO he had join the marees.THEN had gave him his oid unifomn


    KIARA G.

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  20. olive wanted to know hos jerse it was but his grandpa was wanting to wait untail he was older so his grandpap told him that he played for the cubs that was his favirot team he had a dream that came tru and thas how the stores ends from ricky rodriguez

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  21. Anonymous said...
    From:Alex


    Oliver grandpa wanted to play with the cubs.But when his grandpa told him to find this material, he found a box with a cubs uniform.So then his granpa came and saw him examing his box in the back, of the shelf.Then Olivers grandpan told him the story of when he was young

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  22. oliver`s grandpa wanted to ply baseball but they wouldnt let him so he hit a ball really far then they let him play.

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