My Rotten Redheaded Older Brother is one of my all time favorite stories. It reminds me so much of my older brother! I hope that you enjoyed listening to it too. I would like for you to summarize this story for me using SWBST. After you summarize the story, I would like for you compare yourself to the children in this story. Be sure to use complete sentences! Re-read your comment before you post it to be sure that it makes sense. And don't forget to post your name! I look forward to reading your responses.Happy Reading! :)
-Miss Harwood
Dear Miss Harwood,
ReplyDeleteSomebody:Tricia,Richard,and their Grandmother.
Wanted:Tricia wanted to do something better than her brother.
But:He always beated her at everything.
So:Tricia made a wish.
Then:When they went to the carnival Tricia got on a ride and her brother got down and she noticed that she did something better than her brother.Then when they went home Richard and Tricia were sleeping with their grandmother.
Sincerly Katherine
DEAR MISS HARWOOD
ReplyDeleteSOMEBODY:RICHARD,TRICIA,AND THEIR GRANDMOTER
WANTED:SHE WANTED TO DO SOMETHING BETTER THAN HER BROTER
BUT:HE WAS ALWAYS BETTER THAN HER
SO:TRICIA MADE A WISH
THEN:ONE DAY TRICIA AND HER BROTHER WENT TO THE MARY GO ROUND AND TRICIA WAS ON THEIR LONGER THAN HER BROTHER SO THEN THEY WENT HOME AND TRICIA'S DREAM CAME TRUE
SINCERLY,KARI
dear miss.harwood
ReplyDeletethe little girl wanted to get back at her red headed older because but she couldnt beat him at anything so she wished uppon a shooting star
and then on the next day a carnival was in the fields so she stayed longer on it and she beat him because of thet.
scinceirly your student gami m student
Dear Miss Harwood, The book My Rotten Redheaded Older Brother is about a girl named Tricia.Tricia`s older brother does everything better than her so she wanted to do something better than him.But he always came out doing evrything better than her.So she made a wish.Then she tried yo do something better than him, and her wish came true. Sincerly, Giselle
ReplyDeletedear miss harwood i liked the story.the story remind me that me and my sister always chalenge like running bike race or read fast,but my sister was like the brother she almost in everithing won but i won some to.
ReplyDeletefrom:MARIO BENITEZ
dear miss.harwood its kind of just like me and my big sister but i would call my sister that knows it all she thinks that she is older than me and stronger than me i would get mad and she is im to little do anything because im 11 years old and my sister is 16 years old but one day me and my sister with sammy and yessica went to the movies we watch paranormal activity i went with them and prove her that is was strong it was a scary movie and my big sister feaked out she couldnt sleep bye herself and i could but i felt bad for her and i wentt to sleep with and i told her that the movie is fake and nothing will happpen im with hershe gave me a huge hug and i stayed with her and i felt like a big sister her but im gald she is my big sister but now im a big sister for three girls
ReplyDeletesincerly ashley ventura
dear miss. harwood
ReplyDeletesomebody TRICIA
WANTED THNIG TO GET BETTER.
BUT SHE FALL OF A RIDE.
SO THEY WENT TO THE FAIR TO GO AND PLAY.
THEN SHE WAS A SLEEP ON HER BED
BY
JAVIER
BONILLA
SOMEBODY:GRANMOTHER;TRISH,RICHARD
ReplyDeleteWANTED:TRITHA WANTED TO DO SOMTHING BETTER
THAN RICHERD
BUT:SHE NEVER COULD FIND SOMETHING TO DO
SO:SHE SAW A WISHING STAR AND WISHED TO DO SOETHING BETER THAN RICHARD
THEN:SHE FOUND SOMETHING AT THE CANEVEL THAT SHE COULD DO LONGER THAN RICHERD THEN THEY WENT HOME AND WHEN THEY GOT THERE RICHERD AND TRITHA AND WHIN THEY GOT HOME THEY SLEPED ON TOP OF THER GRANDMOTHER.
SENCERLY,SHAY GARCIA
DEAR MISS HARWOOD
ReplyDeleteSOMEBODY TRICIA
WANTED TO BE BETTER THAN HIM.
BUT SHE FALL OF HER RIDE.
SO THEY WENT TO RIDE ON A RIDE.
THAN SHE WAS A SLEEP ON HER BED.
BY
JAVIER
BONILLA
Dear Miss Harwwood,Tricia wants to beat her rotten redheaded older brother at something but she cant find a way to so she wishes on a shooting star that she can beat him on something then it comes true but not the way she expexted.
ReplyDelete-Natalie Segovia
stefan salinas
ReplyDeleteThisb book is about a gril named TRICIA. and her brother dose evrything better then her then she try to do a think that she was going to see if he like a type of qosh .and he said no and then ,said i love then and she had goy mad.
Dear Miss Harwood
ReplyDeleteSombody
Ricard, Trisa,and their Grandma
Want
Trisa wanted to do something better than Richard
junior ventura
ReplyDeleteim like that to my cousin thicks he better than me all the time soccer,video games,football so when ever we were playing video games when i came to his house the game was called soccer 2006 so it was to 10 points 1 he made 5 points when i had 3 points it because if you shoot it far you get 3 points so that how i made my goal he did the samething but if you kick it so far you get 5 so i kicked it so far i got 8 then he got 8 too so in the controller i kicked and got 12 points so i said nice game and he said you wont get me next time so thats my story sinerly junior
Miss Harwood, 10/28/09
ReplyDeleteThe book My Rotten Redheaded Older Brother is a really good book.It is now one of my favorite books too. It reminds me of me and my older sister because Tricia wants to something better then her older brother Richard. But everything she did Richard could do better. So she wished pon a shooting star hoping her wish to come true. the carnvil was in town the next day. They rode the mary go round and went around and around many many many times. Richard finally got off. Tricia said ha ha ha I can go on the mary go round longer than you her grandmother said it was time to go home. When she got off she was really dizzy and fell. She fell and landed in a pile of glass bottles and passed out. Richard carrid her home and ran to get the docter. She had to have stiches. Her wish came true. The reason it reminds me of me and my sister because I have always wanted do something better than her and it came true with me when i did pottery!
-Laurel Beaver-
somebody-richard,mamma,pappa,bubby,and trisha
ReplyDeletewanted-trisha wanted richard to lose on something
but-richard was really good at lots of things
so-she made a wish on a star
then-she won a bet
-gabrielle-
Somebody-richard,mom,dad,bubby,and trisha.Wanted-trish wanted to prove she was better then him at something.But-Richard always bet here.So- shje made a wisd to beat his brother at anything.Then-they got on the Marrie-go-round richared got off and Trisha got dizzy and fell off and had to get stiches.
ReplyDeleteFrom Atalia
SOMEBODY-richerd,mom,dad,bubby,trisha.
ReplyDeleteWANTED-trisha wanted to be beteter at something than her brother.
BUT-her brother richerd always was beter at every thing.
SO-trisha made a wish to do something beter than he brother.
THEN-trisha got on the marrie-go-round.richard got dizzy and got off the ride.then trisha got veary dizzy and fell off and fainted.
Leslie Monrroy
Dear Miss.Harwood,
ReplyDeleteThe book "My Rotten Redheaded Older Brother"Is about a girl named Tricia. Tricia's older brother does everything better than her so tricia wants to do something better than him. He always came out doing everything better than her. so she made a wish on a shooting star. The next day she tried to something better than him and her wish came true.
-JONATHAN G.-
Dear Ms.Harwood,this story was great,there was this girl named Tricia and she had a brother
ReplyDeletethat can do everything better than her.In her
bed she saw a falling star(meteorite)with her
bubbie and then bubbie made a wish.So Tricia
stayed up all night until she sees a meteorite.
Then she saw a meteorite and she made a wish
that she can do one thing better than his brother and her wish came true.
Sincerly Eduardo Torres
Dear Miss Harwood,the story my Rotten Redhead Brother is about a girl named tricia who doesn't like her brother because he does everything better than her.she tries to do everything better than him but he always does it better.So one day she and her grandma were sitting out side and a shooting star came by and she made a wish that she do everything better than him and wish came true.
ReplyDeleteThe book i read was my rotten redheaded older brother he could do everything better then him so she wanted to do just on thing anything better then him so sh trying everything so one they a fair was in town so they trying something to do on the merry go round tricai was on there the longist by.josue
ReplyDeletedear miss.harwood,
ReplyDeleteSombody-TRICE,richand,bubby,mom
Wanted-Trish wanted to bet her brother at somthing
BUT-he would always bet her
SO-she wished on a star
THEN-WHEN SHE WISED IT DID NOT COME TURE.
I CAN TRANLAT TO THE KIDS BY ME AND MY SISTER AND MY BROTHER.
BY KIARA GRANT
DEAR MS.HARWOOD,
ReplyDeleteTRISHA DOEST LIKE HIS OLDER BROTHER.SHE WANTED TO DO SOMETHING THAT HE COULDNT DO.BUT HER BROTHER BEET HER AT EVERYTHING SHE COULD DO.SO WHEN THE FAIR CAME IN TOWN SHE BEET HER BROTHER AT THE MARRY GO ROUND. TRISHA WENT SEVERAL MORE TIMES THAN HER BROTHER. WHEN TRISHA GOT OFF SHE WAS EXTREAMLY DIZZY. SHE FAINTED AND HER BROTHER TOOK HER HOME AND CALLED THE DOCTOR.THEN TRISHA WAS HAPPY TO HAVE A ROTTEN RED HEADED BROTHER.
I WOULD COMPARE TIRISHAS BROTHER LIKE MY BROTHER.MT BROTHER THINKS HE CAN DO EVERYTHING BECAUSE HE IS 5 YEARS OLDER THAN ME BUT I AM LIKE TRISHA BECAUSE I BEET HIM AT SOMETHING BUT I GOT HURT AT THE SAME TIME.
SINCERLY ZAINAB KHURRUM
DEAR MISS.HARWOOD, SOMEBODY;THERE WAS A GIRL AND HIS BROTHER IS GOOD AT EVER THING AND SHE CAN NEVER BEAT HIS BROTHER. WANTED;THE ONLY THING THAT THE GIRL WANTES IS TO BE HIS BROTHER.BUT;THER WAS NOTING THAT SHE WAS CAN DO TO BEAT HIS BROTHER.SO;SHE MADE WISH IN A SOOTING STAR AND SHE KNEW THAT SHE WAS GOING BEAT HIS BROTHER IN SOMETHING.THEN;SHE WELL HIS BROTHER SAW A CIRCIT COMING TO HIS FILE AND SHE SAID I CAN RIDE THE ROLLER COSTER MORE THAN YOU AND HIS BROTHER GOT OFF AND SHE WON!!!!
ReplyDeleteSENCIRLE ABELARDO
dear miss harwood the book I read it was cool so here it is there was a little girl and a brother he was really mean to her she could never beat him she challeng him to eat some thing he said he did not like it after that wen they started eating she said i thought you didn't like it he said i love it so much i really love it i really do love and he still eat it untill he got full
ReplyDeletericky rodriguez
It was funny because he kept getting her mad.I did not like him in some of the book. He was rood to. If that was my brother, I will be mad.
ReplyDeleteTricia had a older brother.She wanted to beat him at something.She tried and tried but she had no luck.So then their grandmother said if they wanted to go to a fair.Then when they got there they went on a merry go round.She bet her brother that she could stay there without getting disea.She won but she got to disea that she fell on the ground.They went home and layed her on the bed.When she woke up her older brother said that she finally beat him in something.That also reminds me and my older sister.
ReplyDeletesincerly,German
Tae-Tae 11/2/09
ReplyDeleteThere was a girl named Trisha that had a brother that thought he can do everything better then her. One day Trisha thought she can pick more berries then he could when she came back he had pick more berries then her. She said that he had pick more berries then her that even in 10 before anyone could pick that much. One day she saw a shouting star she wished that she could do something better then her brother any thing she said. One day she got on a merry go round with her brother and he got off but she stayed on and she won but then she started to get disy and then she fell. When she woke up her brother gave here a rag for her head she told her brother why are you giving me this rag he said that is what a big brother is for her brother stil;l could some thimgs better then her but they still loved each other.
Rubi 11\2\09
ReplyDeleteThere is a girl her name is Trisha that had brother that thought he could do everything better than her.Trisha wanted to beat him at something.But she said "I can pick more berries than you."he had beat her.so one night her grandma and her saw a shoting star grandma and her made a wish.then Trisha's wish was to do something better than her brother.The nexand she said i can go around the marri go round moer times than you and she did her wish come true .
Dear Miss.Harwood,
ReplyDeleteMy Rotten red head older brother was about a girl that hated her brother because her brother always beat her in everything.
Then one day she saw her grandma lik her fingers and then kiss her heart.She asked grandma why she did that.She said that "that how you maken a wish. So the next time she saw a shooting star she kissed her heart,and she hoped that it wopuld work.The next day they saw the fair right in the corner.When they went there she made a bet that she could ride on the merry go round longer than he could. Once acouple of minutes past he got off.Then she started to ride in joy she got dizzy.So she got off.When she got off she fell down and past out.When she woke up she found out that her brother wasn't rotten.She found out she was a hero.
Sincerlly Alex,
MY ROTTEN REDHEAD OLDER BROTHER is abouta girl who could never beat her older brother at anything.Until one day she wished on a shooting star to beat her brother at something.The next day they went to the fair and they both went on the marry-go-round,her brother got off first.She knew that she could do something he couldnt.Then she fell off the merry-go-round.She got stiches but she was still happy she beat her brther at something.
ReplyDeleteMY ROTTEN READHAEDED OLDER BROTHER is about a girl who wanted to be better than her brother.She tried everything,but she lost at every challeng.Until she wished on a shooting star.The next day,she rode the marry-go round the longest.When she got off she was so dizzy,and fell.Her brother piked her up and took her home. from ashley h.
ReplyDeleteMy Rotten Redheaded Older Brother was a good book to listen to.I like it know that I heard of it.I like because it talks about a girl that has this older brother that teases her alot.He thinks that he can beat her at everythihg.When her grandmother leaves he turns to a boy that can do what ever he wants.When her grandmother is there he acts so sweet so she will love him more.But one day the carnival came to town and the girl asked her brother that she could beat him in the horses and she did.I love this book.
ReplyDeleteJuan Flores
The book My rotten red head older brother was a good book.I thought the boy was rood. He was being mean to his little sister. He tried to be better than her. So she tried and they got along.
ReplyDeleteSinceraly,Savannah Garcia
i felt bad for that little girl because her older brother acted like he was better than her at everything.but she got him off the marry-go-round first . but when she was getting off she fell into a pile of soda bottles. then got nocked out. but her bother carried her home than he ran to the doctors. theren she had to get stiches it was a very goood book. ...Rylee T.
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